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PostSubject: Shadowmoon's Bio   Wed Dec 18, 2013 9:45 am

I'm starting over:
Name: Shadowmoon
Nickname:Moon
Age: 2 3/4
Gender: Female
Rank Desired: hunter
Species: Grey wolf
Coat Color; white-silver
Eye Color: blue-green with gold flecks
Height: 35 in
Weight: 125
Build: streamlined but muscular
Markings: crescent shaped moon over left eye
Scars: N/A
Other:N/A
Personality: quiet, moody, keeps to myself, calm and moderate unless riled, reckless, obstinate, intelligent
Family: parents died in fight
History: grew up in slums after parents death a couple months ago, wandering the area, rouge
Moon is an orphan after her parent were both murdered by her uncle 6 months ago. After taking her revenge, she has been running ever since, careful to avoid pack boundaries. Her best friend was with her until he was killed because he entered another packs boundaries. Her grief keeps her emotions and feelings locked away. She never trust anyone but is willing to give it a try. Her white fur and flashing blue-green eyes make her noticeable in woodland ares, but she manages to hunt decently.
Her streamlined,skinny body hides a horde of muscle that springs into action when the time is right or when her friends are in danger. She is a bit reckless at times and sometimes need a helping hand or someone to advise caution though she wont admit it. She is very moody and disappears at night to run, practice, or just simply think. She moves almost like water her white fur there one second and the next gone. Her few friend call her an introspect and introvert. She rarely talks except when she has to. She'd much rather have some action than sit around doing nothing.
Strengths: fighting, hunting, running, takes risks
Weaknesses: to smart for my own good, reckless, obstinate
Likes: dark and cold places, the nighttime, practicing
Dislikes: daytime, sleep, anything where there is no action, when injured
Habits: disappears at night to practice fighting, hunting, running
Sponsor: alpha from other pack told me
Average Attendence: 7
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PostSubject: Re: Shadowmoon's Bio   Thu Dec 19, 2013 1:50 am

Good luck getting accepted you should not post this thread in the accepted bios though post them in the place of hestia because you have to be accepted by kipxin, kole, or azreal

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PostSubject: Re: Shadowmoon's Bio   Thu Dec 19, 2013 7:33 am

I'm still new, srry

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PostSubject: Re: Shadowmoon's Bio   Thu Dec 19, 2013 9:56 pm

It's okay none of us usually bite except me, you can go repost your bio and delete this thread as you are the creator if you have trouble or need help pm me.

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PostSubject: Re: Shadowmoon's Bio   Fri Dec 20, 2013 3:22 pm

Hey Shadowmoon! Just a few things I need clarified:
1. You say your wolf grew up in the "slums" after her parents died? What does that mean?
2. Where/why does your wolf "practice" so much?
3. Who exactly was your sponsor? (:

If you wrote a more descriptive personality or history I think these things would be clarified. You did a good job on your bio answering all the questions, it's just the little details that confused me. The biography is one of the first tests your RPG skill is up against, so it's important to try and be descriptive and detailed just like you were writing a response in the actual RPG! If you could clarify the above things, I don't think you'll have any issue getting accepted.

Thanks for your patience!

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PostSubject: Re: Shadowmoon's Bio   Fri Dec 20, 2013 7:42 pm

Is that better?

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PostSubject: Re: Shadowmoon's Bio   Fri Dec 20, 2013 11:57 pm

Kipxin I am her sponsor, you can check my site out
Shadowmoon, this is your bio, a representation of your rping skills along with how others get to know you, your backstory is good but sometimes the details are important, such as is your wolf's true personality reckless but she hides it under a frosty exterior shell, or does she really have a big heart that is held together only by scotch tape? It is a good idea to be extremely detailed because when the drama starts to happen and your character needs to have a defined character in it this will be your fall back and it will allow new and old members to get to know your wolf so that you don't constantly have to explain yourself. remember if the reader can still ask why, then you have not been detailed enough, there are some really good bios that you can check out (not mine) that will give you examples to follow.

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PostSubject: Re: Shadowmoon's Bio   Sat Dec 21, 2013 12:10 am

Thanks Whisper. Am I accepted, or do I have to change it?

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PostSubject: Re: Shadowmoon's Bio   Sat Dec 21, 2013 12:37 am

Shadowmoon only and assembly member (azreal, kole, kipxin) may accept you

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PostSubject: Re: Shadowmoon's Bio   Sun Dec 22, 2013 10:48 pm


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PostSubject: Re: Shadowmoon's Bio   Sun Dec 22, 2013 10:53 pm

YAY welcome.

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